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can you edit the story ?please click on it ! PLEASE CAN YOU HELP ME ON THIS

huzaifahhuzaifah
edited February 2016 in Help! with 2.0
and help on this story

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  • huzaifahhuzaifah
    can you tell me the faults on this story
  • TheMadExileTheMadExile
    On the "loughborough road" passage you have: 
    (set:  $time 4)
    Similarly, on the "eton road" passage you have: 
    (set: $time to + 4)
    Both are incorrect.

    If you're trying to set $time to 4, then you want something like the following: 
    (set: $time to 4)
    If you're trying to add 4 to $time, then you want something like the following: 
    (set: $time to it + 4)


    On the "rectory road" passage you have two (link:) macros: 
    (link: albert road "")[(set: $time to it + 4)(goto: "Home")]

(link:mabel grove  "")[(set: $time to it + 4)(goto: "Home")]
    Both are incorrect.

    The quotes go around the text, so they should look something like the following: 
    (link: "albert road")[(set: $time to it + 4)(goto: "Home")]

(link: "mabel grove")[(set: $time to it + 4)(goto: "Home")]

    Also, there is no "Home" passage , but I expect you know that.
  • huzaifahhuzaifah
    thank you but my teacher put that in
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